英语翻译有哪些不通顺的麻烦下大哥大姐帮忙提点建议,急着要出国面试的 很高兴见到你 我叫.,今年24岁了,我来自中国,家乡

Hello,nice to meet you! My name is...I'm 24 years old this year and come from longyan, fujian,China.There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my grandfather and I. my hobby is listening to music and sports,my life values are optimisim and hardworking, which directly affect my attitude toward life. I think spiritual satisfaction is more important than material satisfaction, the reason I went to Singapore is that I can learn more knowledge, see the bigger world, and move ahead on the way of achieving the meaning of life. I had failed before,but I won't conceal. Once in the company's party, it is the first time I sang on stage, since I was nervous when I began to sing ,I went out of tune, you know, I was very nervous at that time, I admit that it was very frustrating, but then many people applauded for me, giving me the spiritual support, I readjusted my state and sang the song well finally. This made me have a lot of feelings, I must believe myself can do it. The maximum pressure in my work is I like to accept new challenges.And of course,when have a new job, I will be lack of experience, then I need more careful thinking and well arranged planning, and finally when you finished the proper job , the sense of achievement is satisfying and memorable. I will do my job seriously,and I really cherish it and I'm eager for this job opportunity, thank you!