问题描述：
能不能帮我挑挑英语作文的毛病,分很低,我也不知道哪里错了,是时态还是动词还是句子不对?
作文如下
本人作文如下
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
Opinions are divided on the questions.Most of students think we should carry the mobile phone to school .Because it is convinient to talk with parents and it is a fashion .But most of teachers are against the idea .They think students is young.They can t control themselves effectively .In the evening,student spend a lot of time playing games and sending email.What s more there are a lot of phone in the school .
In my opinion ,studying is very importent ,
作文如下
本人作文如下
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.
Opinions are divided on the questions.Most of students think we should carry the mobile phone to school .Because it is convinient to talk with parents and it is a fashion .But most of teachers are against the idea .They think students is young.They can t control themselves effectively .In the evening,student spend a lot of time playing games and sending email.What s more there are a lot of phone in the school .
In my opinion ,studying is very importent ,
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