英语高手分析下面这个句子有没有语法错误?我自己写的一个句子,想确认一下

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英语高手分析下面这个句子有没有语法错误?我自己写的一个句子,想确认一下
Such is a stark contrast to the conventional ways of searching library shelves that students nowadays can have convenient access to almost everything needed by clicking a button, both saving time and improving efficiency.
我把原来的句子改了一下,希望能用such is . that ... 看看对吗.意思是传统的到图书馆查资料方式非常不同,现在的学生可以通过网络得到想要的资源.
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我来补答
such is ... that 略有 “如此.” 之意.
你的翻译也不错,但如果要用 such ... that
建议你这样说:
The internet presents such a stark contrast to the conventional ways of searching library shelves that nowadays students can simply conveniently access almost everything just by clicking a button, thus saving time and improving efficiency.
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